Bên cạnh hướng dẫn phân tích kĩ từ vựng trong bài báo New BLACKPINK-Selena Gomez 'Ice Cream' song and music video released (Jakarta Post), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn kĩ thêm các cách paraphrase 2 cụm thường gặp nhất trong IELTS WRITING TASK 1 là "the number of.." & "the percentage of..."
I. Paraphrase "the number of.." IELTS WRITING TASK 1
1. The figure for
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Canada and the United States have the smallest figures for mobile phones, standing at 38 and 48, in sharp contrast to Germany, which records a higher number of 70.
2. S + experience / witness +....
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Đây là cách đa dạng hoá cấu trúc, thay vì cứ paraphrase chủ ngữ
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Likewise, California has experienced the dominant use of water for residential and industrial reasons, with 39% and 33% respectively.
3. The amount of + danh từ không đếm được
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Đọc kĩ cách dùng THE AMOUNT OF (lưu ý 19)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The chart illustrates the changes in the amount of electricity generated by wind, solar, and hydroelectric power in the year 2020
4. The quantity of
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Đọc kĩ cách dùng the quantity of
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The graph illustrates the quantities of electronic devices sold in a retail store over a period of one year.
- The chart below shows the quantity of houses sold in 8 cities in the world for more than 5 million US dollars in 2009 and 2014.
5. The data
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Moving on to the other pie chart, the worldwide data shows a different picture, which IS illustrated by the fact that it is agriculture consuming THAT CONSUMES water the most in the world at large ( 69%) and that slightly more than 20% of water IS utilized for industrial areas.
- The bar chart illustrates the fluctuations in annual precipitation levels across different regions over a five-year period, and it is evident that the data reveal a notable disparity between the arid climate of Region A and the consistently high rainfall in Region B
6. Total
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The chart below shows the total of houses sold in 8 cities in the world for more than 5 million US dollars in 2009 and 2014.
6. The statistics
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
In sharp contrast, Canada and the United States report the smallest statistics for mobile phones, standing at 38 and 48, while Germany registers a greater count of 70.
II. Paraphrase "the percentage of.."IELTS WRITING TASK 1
1. The proportion of
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of households using renewable energy sources in a European city over a 10-year period, from 2010 to 2020
2. The figure for
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- Unlike Canada and the United States, where mobile phone figures are 38 and 48 respectively, Germany reports a higher count of 70.
- Canada and the United States have the smallest figures for mobile phones, standing at 38 and 48, in sharp contrast to Germany, which records a higher number of 70.
3. The data
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The bar chart illustrates the fluctuations in annual precipitation levels across different regions over a five-year period, and it is evident that the data reveal a notable disparity between the arid climate of Region A and the consistently high rainfall in Region B
4. The rate
IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:
- Rate chứ không phải Ratio nhé, học kĩ cách dùng từ Ratio (lưu ý 20)
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- The line graph illustrates the changes in the rate of car ownership per household in a suburban area over a decade, starting from 2010 and concluding in 2020
5. The statistics
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ:
- In sharp contrast, Canada and the United States report the smallest statistics for mobile phones, standing at 38 and 48, while Germany registers a greater count of 70.
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