Giải đề"THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGES OF MEN AND WOMEN AGED 60-64 IN EMPLOYMENT IN FOUR COUNTRIES, IN 1970 AND 2000"IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 18/1/2024)

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I. Đề bài

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGES OF MEN AND WOMEN AGED 60-64 IN EMPLOYMENT IN FOUR COUNTRIES, IN 1970 AND 2000

THE CHART BELOW SHOWS THE PERCENTAGES OF MEN AND WOMEN AGED 60-64 IN EMPLOYMENT IN FOUR COUNTRIES, IN 1970 AND 2000

II. Từ vựng

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III. Phân tích

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    • Overall:
      • The employment rates for men exceeded those for women in the specified age group during both years, with Japan leading in both gender categories. 
      • There was an overall decrease in employment among individuals aged 60-64 across the four countries.
    • Body 1:
      • During 1970, Japan exhibited the highest employment rate among males aged 60-64 at 85%, followed closely by Belgium at 79%, Australia at 76%, and the US at 73%. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • By 2000, although Japan retained the highest employment rate for men in this age group compared to the other nations, it had decreased to 74%. Concurrently, the other countries demonstrated similar patterns, with Belgium experiencing the most significant decline, reaching 19%.
    • Body 2: 
      • In the case of women within the same age range, Japan maintained the highest employment rates, starting at 43% in 1970 and decreasing to 40% by 2000. 
      • This stood in sharp contrast to Belgium, which, despite a negligible drop from 8% to 7%, consistently reported the lowest figures. 
      • Conversely, the US and Australia witnessed upward trends in the employment rates of 60-64 year-old women, with the former increasing from 36% to 39% and the latter from 16% to 18% by 2000.
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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.